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  • Other » Humor, General Re: Testiculosis, Parts One Through Five

    I'm not really sure what you want out of a review then which was part of why it was so difficult to give you a decent critique. If I take ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Foxglove: Chapter Three

    Sweet! Can't wait to see what's in store.

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 17 Part 2

    Actually, the butler wouldn't be as involved right now if you hadn't made that suggestion before! I blame his wonderfulness on you ;)

    Oct 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 16

    XD Oh no. Not at all. That statement just sums up that group of boys which is why it's included. Thank you for the review!

    Oct 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Stupid Heart [Part 2]

    No. I mean her being late for his last moments. I find it very hard to believe she would go get his ex. Well... I didn't find it insulting but ...

    Oct 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 1

    Weeeeell... I'm not sure what to call it. So far (and probably never) there's no magic or mythical creatures. It's. .. very political, fairly conservative fantasy.

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review! The reason you're confused about the setting is because I wasn't sure what the time period was yet XD It's like a... 20's meets imperial era ...

    Oct 5, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 16

    I'm in a place between set plot points, so I'm just winging it now, and I've been struggling a bit with transitioning. The next chapter should be better~ Thanks for ...

    Sep 20, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Undead, Golden, Angry Birds [Part 2] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    Awwwww! I have no words. This chapter as a whole was just too cute. The single thing, is that I don't feel Maria's fear. It's all action, no real emotions. ...

    Sep 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 2

    Of course

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 2

    Ooh. That makes sense. Sweet~ This all due for a major overhaul.

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 2

    xP Don't be sorry. I'll consider changing the wording. Mm... It might be helpful for you to tell me what gave you the impression that Lekan was outside in the ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Veil - Chapter 1

    reply didn't go through which I'll take as a sign. However, the gravel may make more sense if you read it as gavel. Other than that, I agree with your ...

    Sep 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Five Golden Rings in a Dreamworld [part 1] (Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    ...I'm giving you more notifications now. I'm sorry xP I actually really enjoy Geology. I thought it was going to be boring, but it's actually really interesting. Of course, I ...

    Sep 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Supernatural Re: The Doctor and the giant calling birds (Part 4 Twelve Days Before Christmas) *Edited*

    You probably did get a lot of notifications from me today :3

    Sep 2, 2014


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