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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Ep.Five

    'Ello Blackie~ I'm here to review this. Sadly, as fantastic as I've heard this is, I haven't had time to read any of your previous episodes, so if I say ...

    Nov 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Descent Chapter 8: Old and New Friends Part 3

    Hey R4ven~ I apologize now if I make any incorrect comments. This is the first chapter of yours that I've read, and chapter eight is rather late in the game ...

    Nov 13, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Fluke Kingdom

    Hey~ A knight here to review this for you. I'm rather intrigued with this concept. It seems silly that I was so surprised since this is basically the creative process ...

    Oct 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Real American Woman, ch. 8

    Hey there~ Megs for a review. Your ending was very sweet. It left the entire chapter at a very nice point. I'm not very good at small talk, so... I'll ...

    Oct 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Postman Ep. 1 (Any Idiot)

    Hey Paracosm~ I'm here to give you a quick review. Your opening is beautiful. I have no complaints. Very good hook if I say so myself... With that, I'm going ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dragged Down by the Stone - Part Two: Jesus Freaks

    Hey~ Megs here as requested. So, I think this is your best chapter by far. It's funny, flows well, less grammatical errors. However I did find a few things... I ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dragged Down by the Stone - Part Three: Baptism of Fire

    Hey~ Megs here as requested. Somehow... I got to Chapter Three before Chapter Two... Oh well. xP Your setting in this chapter was really charming, as awful as the people ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Dragged Down by the Stone - Part One: You've Got to Be Crazy

    Hey Spots~ Megs here as request First, you've got a great character here. I'm really impressed with him. He's fun to listen to, kind of deep, a little sly, you ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Three, Part One

    Shady~ Hi~ So, I think your characters are ridiculously charming. I mean, I want to pick everyone of them up and study them and study them until I know everything ...

    Aug 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Heartbeats: ​Chapter 2

    Hey Umaima! Here to give you a review~ I haven't read chapter one, so I'm sorry if I make any weird assumptions. What cute characters! I love them, and I'm ...

    Aug 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Slenderman: Origins - Part Two

    Hey there Luk! I'm here to give you a quick review. I've played this game once before on a friend's laptop. It was scary. xD You do a good job ...

    Aug 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: A Short Drop and a Sudden Stop

    Hey Spots, I'm here to give you a review. Very pretty language you have here. I can tell you put some thought into the art of relaying what you have ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Charm of Deception- Chapter Two, Part Two

    Shady~ So hi. This is for your review on my chapter deal. Le payback I guess you could say except it's a good thing. I'm going to just jump in. ...

    Aug 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Worst Night.

    Hi House Cat, Quick review. I apologize for the wait. I haven't been very efficient recently. I loved your ending, very unexpected that. Sad endings aren't normally the expected, and ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Literature Re: Golden Train

    I leave for ten minutes, and you already have three reviews. >.> This must be amazing. Of course, you wrote it, so I should have already known that. Hi Jelly, ...

    May 21, 2013


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