megefford

The imagery is great. I like the confusing structure of the dreams, and how it changes from dream to dream to reality. Nice work.

The imagery is great, but I think you should review and edit the poem and make sure it is really what you are trying to say before posting it. Also, ...

I don't have a Read/Write tab, and the page that comes up looks different from what is on the video. Is there another way I can do this?

You have a good basic idea down, but maybe you could try writing out what is going to happen in general, and then filling in the blanks before writing the ...

I really like the imagry, and the structure was very interesting. It was a complete success because you took readers to a place where they could understand what you were ...

This is very well writen; the writing style is very clean, and it is a smooth poem to recite. I loved the structure and the story behind it.

This is impressive- I am never able to do things like spell out a word or name in the first letter of every sentence because the restrictions are too much ...

I am writing a novel that is about the child in this story; what do you think so far? I needed to get out the background story before I could ...

Baria breathed the clean night air of the forest, calming her pulse. She placed a hand on her rounding belly, three months pregnant. Her husband of the Forest Rights was ...

Hi! My name is Meaghan- I am writing a novel at the moment called Spiritglass City, and co-writing another one with ny sister called I Have a Card for That. ...