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Re: The Final Dawn
The Final Dawn The last wind blows in from the east, And the singing of the birds has ceased. The final drop of rain fell long, long ago, And never ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Looking at the moon
Hey :) As soon as I say 'Moon' in the title I read it straight away :P I love the moon big style. Unfortunatrly I can't comment much on thing ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Summons From Across The Wooded Canyon
I would request that you listen to either a song called Tomhet by Burzum whilst listening to this please. It is a very big part of the atmosphere I think. ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: Loss
Just want to point out that this is NOT about global warming or any topic such as that. It's simply dealing with me moving away from the place that I ...
Sep 14, 2011 -
Re: Passchendaele
Hey :D I said I'd review it so here I am...Finally doing it :P Overall, this was a good piece. The sections-although somewhat a bit short-were good and got your ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Unwritten | Chapter 2
Hey! Got to this through the random story button. It really is very useful :P First of all, I very much liked the medieval vibe; it's one of my favourite ...
Aug 8, 2011 -
Re: (No Title Yet) - Chap. 1, Part 2
Once again you haven't failed to produce a fine piece of writing. Well done! :D First of all I had a look about the origins of Chess for you since ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: (No Title Yet) - Chap. 1, Part 1
Hello :D I'm Sean and I'm pleased to give this work the first review. :) First off, I thought this was an amazing piece of writing. I enjoyed the descriptions ...
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: Tears of the Spirit (Title pending)
Something I wrote very early in the morning in the style of the early lyrics of Varg Vikernes. I won't tell you what its meaning is since it will be ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Saving Aleogra -Entranced- Chapter 1
Hey :) I'll be having a look at this piece today, so I'll just begin. First of all, the beginning made me giggle a bit. 'It was the Scottish Countryside. ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Adrianople
Hey! :) I'll be having a quick look at your writing today. So I'll just begin. :) First thing I noticed was the spacing of this. It's something that needs ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Crusader's Flame [Chapter one part 1]
Hey! I'll be reviewing your writing today. It's fairly short so it's a good one to start review day with. :) Punctuation changes will be in red and in brackets ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Title pending *suggestions welcome*
Hey, just stumbled upon this and, even though it's not what I would normally read, I still quite like it and find myself wanting to read more. So well done ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Passchendaele
Hey! Just had a quick skim through this and wanted to say that I liked it! :) I'll be posting a review of this soon, once I have a bit ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Dawn Chapter 2
Hey again. :) Since I liked the first chapter of this so much I rushed straight onto the next one :P So here goes. Chapter 2: Midsummer In the village ...
Apr 17, 2011
