mdiceon

heyy! wow this is so awesome! i really love the storyline and i find it really captivating! i just saw one thing to change at the beginning when you wrote ...

wow this is amazing! i wish i could give you some constructive feedback but i really don't know what to change! keep up the amazing work!! :)

[b][b]1 ~ David [/b][/b] The letter came on a typical Wednesday morning. I was making my usual cup of coffee, and Lisa was pouring the kids their bowls of cereal. ...