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Day 8 - late-night texts on fear and happiness Tonight was the first time in 1 month and 24 days that I committed a crime. No, not a crime in ...

Lavvie, your writing is so lovely, wow. Your second and sixth poems are my favorites so far, the imagery really sticks out to me. I love how you can incorporate ...

Hi Traves, I just wanted to say that your first poem is really neat! I love the imagery you created here and the progression towards a dark (but interesting) ending. ...

Hi Liberty, I love your poetry so far! Your fourth and fifth poems were very relatable to me, as someone who personally deals with a lot of anxiety for no ...

Day 7 - messages from another realm This morning I felt my heartbeat in my fingertips as I felt a cold gust of air against my pale legs in a ...

#4 and #5 are my favorite poems you've written so far, I can heavily relate to those feelings of wanting someone to love you but to not see any imperfections ...

"remnants" and "happily ever after" are great poems! My favorite part of "remnants" was the first stanza, I really felt that I could relate to it. i let myself forget ...

Day 6 - yellow daffodils Your flowers finally bloomed today, after a long season of never-ending rain and prayers for protection against the unrelenting birds and squirrels. They were yellow ...

Although all of your writing is great, your fourth poem is my favorite so far! My favorite line had to be the last one where you wrote "How beautiful to ...

All of your poems so far are lovely, but my favorite would have to be your second one, remains of faith. I think the part that hit me the most ...

Your first poem is still my favorite so far, but I think your fourth one is a pretty close second! I think my favorite lines were "We were once Pangaea, ...

Day 5 - thoughts on life and healing injuries The bruise on my knee is starting to get better. I know that because everyone says it happens when it starts ...

Your last poem is definitely super relevant today for a lot of people. I'm currently stuck at my apartment in my college town and last night I'm pretty sure I ...

Day 4 - blue hair dye Blue is the color of my eyes, the windows to my soul that let in light on the sunny days and protect against the ...

I love your writing style, keep up the great work! :)