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  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 14 - reasons why you should date a poet i. They will use the most descriptive metaphors and the most beautiful similes when they are asked to describe you, ...

    Apr 15, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 13 - another love poem Sometimes it feels like love was never meant for me. I don’t say this to get sympathy, I say this because I’ve seen all ...

    Apr 14, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the life of an american teenager

    Jay, I know I've probably said this what seems like a million times already, but "an atheist's easter" has by far been the poem that I feel I can relate ...

    Apr 13, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: i should be sleeping but my heart is awake

    I really like version 3 of your first poem, specifically the second one in the double post - where you placed "some people" in that version seemed to feel like ...

    Apr 13, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 12 - if the weekdays were people i knew Monday - you are a rude awakening but also a fresh start; a chance to pick up the pieces and ...

    Apr 13, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: My LIfe Revolves Around Other People's Whispers

    Your first NaPo poem for this month was great! It definitely explores a topic that I can personally relate to, and I thought that the contrast you created between the ...

    Apr 12, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Living Life in a Lonesome Roadhouse

    Wow, I haven't read many poems in my life about food, so these were a real treat to be able to read! I really enjoyed your banana bread poem - ...

    Apr 12, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Maybe I'll Do This...

    Your latest poem definitely resonates with me and makes me think about how there are so many people today that do not have a place they can call home, which ...

    Apr 12, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the names of all things

    Arcticus, all of the poems you've published here in this thread so far were truly lovely to read and have blown me away. My favorite one that's stuck with me, ...

    Apr 12, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 11 - clogged shower drains and unconditional love I stand still in the freezing shower water, my goosebump-saturated skin turning pruney, fully exposed and yet still hidden underneath layers ...

    Apr 12, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the life of an american teenager

    "sanctuary" is such a relatable poem for me, especially during this time. I used to have a really hard time learning how to deal with noises that bothered me, much ...

    Apr 11, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: Choices made and in the making

    Great job on your latest poem, Katteex! I loved all of it, and the line that I loved the most was "I'm foolish because she was me". It definitely caught ...

    Apr 11, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 10 - an angel in disguise Sugar didn’t taste as sweet and the songs of birds weren’t as graceful before I had met her, the epitome of all things ...

    Apr 11, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: 3am thoughts

    Day 9 - painkillers and poems Friday night risks led to Saturday morning hangovers, some in the form of headaches and others in the form of emotional pain. She wore ...

    Apr 10, 2020
  • NaPoWriMo Archives Re: the life of an american teenager

    gathering my words into my trembling arms, i shape them into a poor excuse for an answer and once again try to answer this impossible homework assignment. I can definitely ...

    Apr 9, 2020


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