mckaylaam

day 1 - i need a new form of transportation -- yesterday i was at our bus stop, the one with the anti-capitalist graffiti that has yet to be scrubbed ...

talking to the faces in my floorboards (napo year 2) ✩ (2020 - 3am thoughts - status: complete ) ✩ table of contents ( click to show list ) day ...

Day 30 - adulthood I last walked on stage a whole two years ago, taking my last steps as a high schooler and my first steps into adulthood. But adulthood ...

Day 29 - eleventh hour My hand begins to cramp as I rush to finish, rush to write all the right words that get my message across. Time is quickly ...

Day 28 - empty mugs She was like the coffee you drank every morning at 6am, something you needed just so you could feel something. She could be strong and ...

Day 27 - silent spring Empty school playgrounds and deserted parking lots stand still, reminders of a life we may have once taken for granted. The sun shines bright and ...

Your April 24th poem, part i - adulthood, was so touching. I see a lot of myself in that piece, as my 20th birthday is coming up in June (which ...

Day 26 - bad weather You were never big on symbolism or the like, so when hail broke your window that first night you kissed me, you only wrote it ...

Day 25 - creative stagnation Half-written metaphors and less than profound quotes haunt my battered notebook, full of sticky notes, that’s become a home to the writer with a choked-up ...

Day 24 - a letter to my mom I want to be free. I want to be free from the hate you taught me to have towards my own body, ...

Current House: Gryffindor Desired House: Hufflepuff

I love the imagery in your April 22nd poem! The idea of being able to help yourself but rejecting that help is really interesting, and I especially liked the line ...

Your imagery in Sinking is stunning! I especially loved the last two lines. Your hand reaches forward to pull me out But will I take it, or shall I die ...

Your writing is absolutely stunning! I won't be able to comment on each and every single one of your poems that you've published in this thread so far, but I'm ...

I really like your latest poem, weathering. The writing is beautiful and I also love how it looks visually. Keep up the amazing work!