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Re: A Sunrise for God *Edit*
You can please God in many ways. You can help others, pray to Him, do what He would do, etc... I liked it because I was able to imagine the ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: sweet sixteen and never been kissed part one
All I can say is that you had a lot of spelling mistakes. You should check your spelling. Then there were some things you cloud've seperated and made more clear. ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Hello, my peeplets!
Hey! Welcome Jazmine! -max
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: I Hate Him.
Totally cute! I like the part where they 1st kiss.
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:
Basically Truth said everything. And I thought it was nice. Keep writing! max
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)
I think it's very interesting, but I think you used she too much, but you were possibly trying to keep her name a secret so the readers could feel like ...
Dec 4, 2010 -
Re: Awakened
Thanks stephene.(:
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Being a Teenager
I liked it. It was ok.
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Awakened
A young child, hardly able to walk, looks around to find out she is all alone. No one nearby. No one to hear her cry. The young child looks up ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: The Domination of the (Slightly) Sarcastic Neon Muffin!!
This was really funny! I was confused at first and lost but it's still funnee.I liked it!I love funny stories.
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Spot
Now if this is about teen acne I'm totally offended. But otherwise from a rate from 1-5 (5 being best) I give this a 3 and 1/2. But be confident ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Hi! All about me...sort of.
My fav things: Fav drink: coca-cola (beats pepsi) Fav singer: Elvis Presley (beats Justin Bieber by hundreds of miles) Fav autor: James Patterson (he has an official site that you ...
Nov 28, 2010