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Re: Turn Two: Little Grey Men
Kaito dropped soundlessly to his knees, all the better to inspect this strange creature. "I knew it," he whispered. "I knew aliens existed!" The grey creature didn't look very impressed. ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers
Thanks! @Genesis a.k.a. maxlovesfang15: Yes, I have read the first and last books of Maximum Ride. I'm not very fond of the series, but it gave me the idea for ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers
[quote="vstarfirix"]Oi, it's you sister here. Your story is great and everything, but there is one thing wrong with it. It's too much like James Patterson' s series, Maximum Ride. Don't ...
Dec 29, 2010 -
Re: Turn 1: The First Whispers
Turn 1: The First Whispers I walk the Silver City alone. The moonlight shimmers off the tall buildings, devoid of life and cold in their beauty. Everybody is asleep but ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Moon Dreamer chapter 1
MERRY CHRISTMAS TO EVERYONE AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Moon Dreamer chapter 1
Ok. I made this chapter 1 instead of 2 and now the old chapter 1 is the prologue.
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Hide and Seek Ch. 1
I think this was really good. Apparently I can't tell you what to fix because th first person who commented said what was needed to be fixed. But I think ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Moon Dreamer chapter 1
Merry Christmas to you too!
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Awakened
Naw not harsh at all. It's okay. I fixed some of it I guess. Thanks for the comments!
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Random christmas story :)
This was totally cute! lol gumdrops! I thought it was good! Very nice! The elves make such a big fuss over little things lol. Keep Writing!
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Ash
First off, I think this was really good. 1) what is a shmabler? 2)maybe the Walking thing should have a cooler name.lol. Well that's it! I think you should keep ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Iceprincess's Royal Reviews :D [Currently accepting!]
This is under Fantasy Novels. I hope you like! -maxlovesfang200
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Saith
I thought this was awesome! And you did this during free time? Wow! I thought it was very good and interesting. Keep writing! :)
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Greetings. ^ ^
Hey Sara! Welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy it here! PM me anytime you want! :D I like the manga Ghost Hunt! :) -maxlovesfang15 :D :D :D :D :D :D ...
Dec 22, 2010 -
Re: Nothing Else, Save Revenge
It was pretty good except I got lost because I had no clue as to what was going on.-_- But it was really good. Mysteryious
Dec 22, 2010
