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Thank you for the review! It was helpful! I will take out those lines like "Why do I need people?!" and fix what you said :3 Thank you very much ...

Yay Hope didn't give fluff XD Oh the choppy paragraphs were done on purpose. She didn't specify we needed actualy paragraphs. I guess I was trying to make it...dramatic? I ...

My best friend is myself. I am Loneliness. Some may mistake me for my brother, Despair or my sister, Fear. But Despair falls upon people unexpectedly like an earthquake that ...

Thank you Hope!! Lol

Well like everyone else said the rhyme scheme was weird-ish but I liked it. Sounds fresh and new! Sounds interesting. I feel like the person who s talking in the ...

This is good! I find it quite humerous. I can imagine an egg with legs only running around my house! But to tell you the truth I really don't get ...

You made sure you described everything, and it worked. I was able to imagine the train and stuff. It was good. Nice job =D

I liked it. To me it expressed your feelings. And it had a nice rhythm to it. Very nice.

Ok first off, I found this poem hilarious. I'm a girl, and I don't even wear those shorts. (I'm not allowed to, plus I wouldn't wear them if I was ...

hey thanks lol ill try to change it soon

CHANGE There are many changes in life, That we have to face. At the moment, we might not like the change, But we never know if it will benefit us! ...

LIFE Life is a precious gift, And oh how some take it for granted! Every breath we take, Every step we make, Is a privilege and blessing from above. Do ...

oh cool this sounds awesome! we can do it! yes we can!

it's coming along well i guess.-_- i haven't had a chance to put the next chapter up.-oh I'm so lazy- I have honor band today (literally almost all day) wish ...

I was going to click the 'submit' button on the tab. I couldn't find it. I realised it was hidden under a serious amount of 'unuse dust'. *coughs* Yes, it's ...