A poem for this day, though it is but two hours and a half to Christmas. I was humming an improvised tune while writing this, so please pardon this seemingly ...
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge