matthewclarke7

Hey! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it and I am glad you liked the story. :) I hope I get around to finishing it, but so far I ...

Yes, you do have a point 'danipower' lol but I must say, I think it would be best to make chapters as short as they can be. It helps quicken ...

Thank you for your review! What you were saying about it being too long was exactly what I thought! I was actually planning on cutting chapter one in half. I ...