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  • Other Poetry Re: Immortal

    My perennial silhouette blackens my dark cold heart, cools my icy flesh, steals all my warmth, my grace it takes, instills (only devouring) ruminations and splits my hollow soul apart. ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Gold and Gray

    Where is the place where the grass glows and the gold sunlight grows? It is where my truest friends depart. And, where is the place where the air fills the ...

    Aug 26, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane

    Hey! Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it and I am glad you liked the story. :) I hope I get around to finishing it, but so far I ...

    Jun 16, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Deadly Heat!

    Love it! As I said on fb chat, it definitely makes me think of that sweltering Summer heat we all know too well; that hot, sticky, humid, unendurable heat that ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Journal of Zachary Crane

    Zachary’s Journal 12th October 1905 -21:59- I have never much liked journals. They just seem quite… silly to me. I mean, what with writing down all your personal details and ...

    Jun 4, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Working Title: The Key

    Yes, you do have a point 'danipower' lol but I must say, I think it would be best to make chapters as short as they can be. It helps quicken ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Fantasy Novel - Chapter 1 - Exiled

    Wicked. There's not much I would change about this... in fact, I actually really can't think of anything that you have really done wrong. Damn, I was really looking forward ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Working Title: The Key

    Thank you for your review! What you were saying about it being too long was exactly what I thought! I was actually planning on cutting chapter one in half. I ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Sunlight's Darkness Prologue

    Well overall I found the prologue to be quite interesting. However, the opening sentence The barman waited a few moments for the customer to get a proper look at the ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Working Title: The Key

    Bruce Foster 19th of February 2012 CHAPTER ONE The fire was roaring. The fire was ferocious. The fire was never ending, golden, bright. The fire’s whispers were cool, placid. It’s ...

    Dec 19, 2010


You are in the wrong land even if the roosters recognize you.
— Nathalie Handal, "Noir, une lumière"