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Re: My Heart
Hello Abocreature :) This is good to be a last minute thing. I agree that it is a bit lacking, I see there is meaning behind it, but I am ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: A no-name Prologue
Hey writ3rindisguis3! crammed the inside cabin, Saying 'cabin' confused me. Isn't it a car, not a cabin? Hehe ;) With a final wave and a sad smile, my best friend ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: Madrigal
Hey LilSarahBreezy :) I like it this piece! Especially the ending. It's very cute, though I agree with Bittersweet that it is a little bit cheesy. Kudos to you, especially ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]
4/10, cupid makes love! We can't kill love... :roll:
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: Broken angel
I think you could make this a lot stronger if you make it longer. We can't get much from your poem (and yes, someone needs to move it, hehe) because ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: Confused
This sounds really interesting, but to get something from it it needs to be longer, I think. I like what you are trying to get it, though. I think you ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: (No Title yet) Chapter 3
Chapter Three I couldn't get my mind off of what Patrick was going to say as I followed Hayden and Dashil home. He wasn't a very serious person, but on ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: (No title yet) Chapter 2
I know, it is short.... Chapter Two This can’t be. I traced the deeply carved words with my fingers. Anna had very unique handwriting, so nobody else could have written ...
Jun 21, 2008 -
Re: (No Title Yet) Chapter 1
Woo! I finally post something new! I'm not sure if it is very good yet because I wrote it really fast, but feel free to rip it apart. :D Chapter ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Diggin' for Gold
LOL! That was very hilarious and unique! And of course this is acceptable, silly. :) Great job on showing the emotions, too. I've had that happen to me where I ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: 'til vs. Till
'Til... easy answer, unlike the analogy.
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: House is to Soda Can as Phone is to...
You drink soda in a house, just like you drive cars in phones. :) That is amazing logic. I'm so intelligent. :D
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: <3love is love<3 [revised]
Amen! I imagined a choir singing that when I read it, lol Great job, though! I totally agree and love this message! :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 :smt041 ~MATeeAH
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Thirteen Kisses: Part Two
Great chapter! I really liked this, and I couldn't even find any correction errors. ;) So good job with that! A couple things I liked was you had some great ...
Jun 13, 2008 -
Re: Dont read! Couldnt delete entry!!
This was interesting, and I'd like to hear more. You should defiantly continue. :) ~Mateeah
Jun 11, 2008