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Yeah, since the main object in this picture is the flowers, you want them to be more sharp and centered. Also the white things in the background are districations, but ...

I LOVE THE KITTY LAYING ON THE GROUND! So cute!!!!

Not sure where I am going with this, I just was bored so I started writing. I may write more, not sure yet. Abandoned Chapter One “I am so nervous…” ...

Wow, this is almost as amazing as your Obama poster. :D This is really good! I love the funny things you throw in, like the cat eating teacher. I loved ...

Keep going with this!!! Please!! I am needing to read more. :) I like this a lot, it's really good. Frank made me laugh with his little menstruating comment. I ...

First off, I agree with TL G-Wooster that the beginning is pretty simple and nothing that really draws you in. When you talked about the birth, it sounded like it ...

Wow, I like this a lot. Your words paint a picture, so nice job!!! Can I, um... join your world please? lol. But seriously... that does sound like a pretty ...

Ooooh I likey :-) Its eye is my favorite part.

Wow, nice job! The Twilight series is one of my favorites. You do need to make sure your rhymes are consistent, and some of those words you plugged in are ...

Speaking of Wicked, if you want a laugh this, is Galinda... Funny stuff eh? Well, I love Wicked, I saw it sometime last year and it was amazing! Unfortunatly, I ...

You portrayed that message really well, good job. :)

I liked this overall, it was simple but gives out a clear message. My only problem was... You even say it when you lay. Even when you lay? That confused ...

LOL I laughed on everyone single one too. Especially the doritos one. Hahaha. You have a creative head. :D ~Mateeah

Love the saying 10/10

I agree with everything GML had to say. To me the sentences kind of sounded like someone was trying to talk as fast as they could saying as much as ...