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Contemplative ...or maybe not, I'll have to think about it.

I have to say I really liked this. The words you used and voice really stood out to me, and as said I really liked the last stanza and how ...

Your poem is unique and that is what I like about it. I think adding a bit more to it and explaining more about why you can't understand time would ...

You definitely made some good points that I totally connected to but I agree with maryletsflyaway. I don't really see a point to it, other than it's truth. Whenever I ...

I liked the similies you used! Very intelligent for a 2nd or 1st grader sheesh, you may even be smarter than your own parents. ;) This is very cute though. ...

This is amazing! I love how you did the water!

Very spooky, I like it! I can already tell what the personality of your character is like. ;) A good tip I got once is to not make the clothing ...

This was really unique, I've never read a poem about the Boston Tea Party!! This was clever, a couple comments is I don't think 'galore' really fits, I don't know ...

This was an intriguing story, I absolutely loved the beginning paragraph about the hands! It really got my attention. Although the beginning scene did seem to be a bit cliché, ...

I thought this was a cute poem, a bit vague and not very descriptive like others have mentioned, blah blah blah. But it is definitely cliche, even the title alone. ...

*This is one of my first poems in awhile! Tear it apart :) Addiction Judgment burns in your eyes, You see bottles, you see lies. Disapproval seeps through your skin, ...

Awww it's so cute! :) Love its jewlery. Hehe.

I took this on Mora Beach. Probably one of the prettiest places I've ever been.

Hello! There is a couple things that bugged me like... In this moment Of my torment I agree with Eimear, if you could find a different word to rhyme it ...

Hi! Sean Gordon sat in his tree house with his two brothers Connor and Max. This is just a suggestion, but this is the first sentence of your story and ...