marzipan

"Ho Ho Ho" Santa pin so sharp Cherry nose, holiday cheer See the blood you draw "Evil" You smile and I know That behind those straight, white teeth Is a ...

Egad! I love this piece! I looked at it, decided it was too long for my idle brain, scrolled down to the comments, read the stanza quoted, fell in love ...

Beginning of a short story I haven't gotten around to finishing. Title needs to be different. (Song credit: Leonard Cohen) Like a bird on a wire Like a drunk in ...

:shock: I don't know why, but I love it.

This face cream thing is getting out of hand. "Just one, darling, just buy one." No, I keep telling her, I don't want to buy your face cream. So she ...

Thank you'se all! I really was stuck on it and all your comments help. I shall change it soon. "You" started off as my friend, cos I was watching her ...

Hehh...thank you all's. Yeah, it actually didn't occur to me until you guys pointed it out about the midriff/gender confusion. I was thinking midriff = mid = middle = towl ...

[i]Wrote this last night...late. Not really sure what I was trying to say. Rhythm's off, any suggestions?[/i] You move like a rag doll A lost, absent rag doll Flopping where ...

HA! This made me laugh. The ability to pull off good satire is an uncommon and wonderful gift. Being as cynical a child as I am, satire is easily relatable. ...

AAUGH! Loved this! I didn't entirely understand, which adds to my love because confusion is my boyfriend. The repetition was lovely, added emphasis and gave it a distinct style (long, ...

It took me a while to realize that they're fairly repetitive. You read one, you've read 'em all. Still, I can't say that I didn't enjoy them when I was ...

I adore the Edge Chronicles! I've read them again and again and again...there's something about them that fascinates me. It just goes to show that not all J-fiction has gone ...

Yesterday I saw you in all your glory: A frayed yellow towel around your midriff As you sped after my snarling dog (He was chasing your kitty, after all). And ...

[b]All the Rhythms[/b] I lost myself in that moment Or maybe, Maybe I found myself. Chaos is a funny thing When everything whirls and Everything twirls And the fluorescent lights ...

This was one of the first I saw when I joined TYWC. It blew my mind then, it blows my mind now. Your beautiful use of language and emotion gets ...