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aah...a month of cold/flu symptoms. Worst ever. Used to have an immune system, don't know where that went. Stuffed up nose, headaches, dizzyness...there was a point when four of my ...

third paragraph, bridge-type-thing is supposed to go And he hums to himself as he struts down the streets Knowing he’s right, ensnared in dirty sheets Let’s pity him and laugh ...

Once he was a little boy, future on a shelf Felt the air between his fingers and named it for himself Now a worry stained man in a blackened briefcase ...

If you used proper grammar, it would be a lot more powerful. I agree, I like the last verse.

That was actually thoroughly enjoyable. Never listen to that sort of thing, but maybe I would if it was all like that. Good, simple but thoughtful lyrics, heartfelt content, and ...

C'est moi. Right after my best friend hacked off all mah hair.

Kinda....blunt and unimaginative. I mean, "It ends up in a heap"...? It's hard to see it in the mind's eye because you simply explain it so literally. But I'm not ...

"resistance is futile" your post-it-note smile reminds me - I haven't unpacked and my scarf is still on the floor. I'd put it off but you've written it in blue ...

Ha. I must admit - I have baaaad parents. No, I'm joking, but they are a little over-trusting in the alcohol department. If I was the sort, I'd easily be ...

I said Pat Buchanan because I thought it was funny but really I don't hate the site as much as I hate him. Heck, I don't even hate Pat Buchanan ...

Kesia Mei Ruth Nagata o.O; Hebrew, Japanese, Hebrew, Japanese. I'm not Hebrew.

Erm...this is kinda a sidetracking from a bigger story I'm writing...just wrote it last night so if you have any editing suggestions I'd very much appreciate them. Solomon Whiteheart hated ...

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Love this. I always love people watching, even if it's in my head :shock: The rhyming worked, which is cool cos normally I kinda dislike structured poems. Simple but effective ...

Good lord, but that is one talent-oozing piece. I would like to quote my favourite part, but alas, there is no such thing. Seriously, I tried to find a passage ...