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Wow, I didn't think anyone would actually read this. The rest of them are up now.

Jason So I’m driving down the road, and the way the moon shines through the distortion of my bug-splattered window turns the pavement into water, and I am somehow managing ...

Yep, they're not meant to be art, really, just ideas for shots and things. It's a short film about three boys who find a dead body on the beach. It's ...

Allan They call it a fleet, like naval ships or something noble, important. I like that, because we are. We’re a fleet of trucks bringing goods to the people, hell ...

My friend (seen below in a couple pictures) and I are in the middle of pre-production on a film we're making, and these are some location shots I took last ...

Don't put the "this is crap" stuff at the beginning (put it at the end!), because now I'm not going to read it, even though it looks good, because it ...

Very nice, your writing technique is excellent enough to make this an interesting and engaging piece. I think most corrections have been pointed out, anyway, just wanted to let you ...

I can't stand analyzing poetry myself, I just like the stuff that sounds right. This sounds right. It's creepy, sure, but in a very satisfying way. I like the raisin ...

Thanks for commenting on my story - if you hadn't, I wouldn't have found your pictures! They're lovely, very beautifully composed. I think the beachscape is my favourite, that sky ...

He had pulled him from the oily ocean, which clung and pulled like a reluctant child, dragged his sodden plaid-shirted body onto the shore and, frozen hands shaking, had placed ...

[ 16+ for language and violence, mostly. ] Dante rarely laughed, kept that certain action to himself like a juicy secret in the dark pool in the middle of his ...

Oops, wasn't finished. Just wanted to say that I also really liked the subtle references to things..."the red planet beckons" reminds me of the scientists trying to figure out a ...

This was full of imagery and music - actually, it could easily be a song. I really loved the mystery and sadness behind the words...sad in a thoughtful, peaceful sort ...

I live in this world where Things are doing okay, Things are moving along quietly but Surely And maybe it's not perfect but it's Home And then you tell me ...

I don't see why this debate need continue. After five pages, we've gotten nowhere. You know why? Because everybody has a stand, and there is very little anyone can do ...