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lil ol me

Thanks for the reviews!

Thanks for the review!

I remember writing a poem very similar to this several years ago. I really love the concept but the formatting is a little off and the phrasing almost seem chunky, ...

I take a drag on my cigarette I know I am going to smell like an ash tray Jacob is sitting next to me And the rain is becoming heavier ...

Messages In the air In our hair And Everywhere Lingering from lips Like drip drops of melted chocolate Seeping, oozing Through cracks of s’mores And broken hearts Messages, messages Chasing ...

I walked up to his front door, the porch light shining dimly to the left. Through the window I could see that the lights were off, but I rang the ...

This poem is really well written. I definitely agree that happiness is hardest to find for those who seek it most. I definitely think that this is man's greatest struggle. ...

This is beautiful. You are really good at setting the scene and making what you are trying to say very clear to your audience. Great work. :)

This is really good. I used to write a lot of acrostics, but I was never able to master it like you have with this little piece. Great work. :)

This is not only good, this is very good! Your imagery is fantastic especially the part about licking honey off of bread with dignity. Your writing is raw yet reserved, ...

It’s funny how I can feel so nauseous After such an experience. My stomach is lurching, Singing, groaning Over and over again Inside me Nothing I do can make this ...

I’d rather watch a movie that spanned only a few days Than some adventure Spanning years A lifetime The best stories happen in a week Or less Those defining weeks ...

Hey! If you guys could like this on Facebook it would be much appreciated. I have been a Harry Potter fan most of my life and I just thought I ...

Be my England, Watch me as I walk along the River Thames Away from the city, Foot in front of foot On that island. Be my England And watch me ...