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Re: Top 5 Best Books
I can't think of five at the moment, but here's one that I finished last year that's just spectacular: 'The Things They Carried', by Tim O'Brien. I love you. i ...
Feb 24, 2006 -
Re: Newsies
Has anyone here seen Newsies. I absolutly love that movie. Right now I am listening to the Newsies Soundtrack and I absolutly love it.
Feb 24, 2006 -
Re: I Shall No Longer Shave My Legs: A Prayer
I actually do not shave my legs. I never have.
Feb 22, 2006 -
Re: The Outcasts of Poker Flats
This is something I had to write for English. What we had to do is write an alternate ending to The Outcasts of Poker Flats. Could you guys please please ...
Feb 15, 2006 -
Re: Yea for new-ness!
Hey welcome to yws. I know you will absolutly love it here. Just to let you know you are loved.
Feb 7, 2006 -
Re: What do you think of the new pay-for-posts policy?
I like it. It has helped me get more focused on critquing. I now never post in the lounge.
Jan 26, 2006 -
Re: Suburban Paradise
I love this poem. I liked the message because I live in subarbia and I hate it here because it is so boring and fake. I especially like the rhythm ...
Jan 24, 2006 -
Re: Hello, I'm new.
Welcome to young writers. If you are a huge history buff you should join the history lovers usergroup
Jan 23, 2006 -
Re: My Resurrection
I absolutly loved your poem. I loved the message you had behind the poem. The idea that this person is resurrecting you and making you who you really are and ...
Jan 23, 2006 -
Re: Gone
I really love this nite. I thought it had good meaning and thought put into it but it does not have very good rhythm
Jan 23, 2006 -
Re: Silent Snowflakes
I loved how short the poem is. The lines I loved the most is 2,3,5,6, and 8. You used description to your advantage. I really could not find anything wrong.
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: You're So Beautiful
You used great imagery. I also loved the first and last stanza. In the first stanza I loved how you used the devil. Like funkyflower said you could work on ...
Jan 22, 2006 -
Re: ~The note in your locker that I wish I had the nerve to put
I loved the way it flowed. I really do not think it needs punctation because I like the way it flows without punctation. But I am not the person to ...
Jan 21, 2006 -
Re: E-Nuff
That is so cool looking. I love the colors and the way you drew the lines.
Jan 21, 2006 -
Re: Intellectual Barbie
I really loved this poem. I actually have found that when I have my contacts and my makeup on it seems the guys look at me different. People sometimes forget ...
Jan 21, 2006
