magpie0817

I love this! I think it would help if you'd describe the main character a little more; this may be because I'm a visual person, and I like imagining the ...

Hey there! This was really well written, though I'm a little disappointed the narrator didn't talk as much; she sounded like she might have had a little bit of an ...

Unbelievably amazing! I loved this! I went right back to the top and read it again once I was done!

thanks for the comments everyone, you're being very helpful :) yes, I'm going to continue this into a novel of some sort, I'd just like some pointers on how I'm ...

I love your style! I also love the originality and intrigue of this story (no vampires, werewolves or cheesy mysterious people, thank the LORD!) great job and keep it up!

Alright, just a few small errors here and there, "His legs had been ripped apart by a weapon I swear the Devil invented and gave to man, canister shot." I ...

All I can say is: YES! I'm a strong Christian and I can't tell you how many times others have given me weird looks for it, or excluded me from ...

First thought: girl power! YES! :DDD I didn't want it to end! You should definitey write more to this, carry it on to a bigger storyline somehow. There's potential in ...

Hey there! I loved this peice, you really caught the essense of the dry atmosphere, though I think you could have dragged on her exasperation a little more rather than ...

I was on a Greyhound bus on my way to visit my parents. College had been my life for the past half year, but this visit served as a well-earned ...