magiclukehutch

Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Luke and I hope you enjoy yourself. I also hope to see you and your work around. Luke 8)

Hi Ralph and welcome to YWS! I'm Luke and I hope you enjoy yourself. I also hope to see you and your work around! Luke 8)

I agree. You should say that you heard bullets flying past you and explosions detonating etc. Keep up the good work!

Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Luke and I hope you enjoy yourself here. I will hope to look out for you and work. Luke 8)

My footsteps echoed through the dormant house, silence ringing through my ears. The breeze sweeps through the house You put the word 'house' twice in two sentences and to me ...

That was very short and I hope there is more to this poem. It seems like a great piece of work, but it's REALLY short.

Here is a song I made up: I knew a girl, that knew me, we always used to walk down by the sea. We were meant for each other, we ...

sadly enough, the first story I can remember was written in the dentist's office when I was probably 4 or 5 and I had my mom write it out for ...

I used to write all my stories on paper when I was little, but now I use my laptop to write everything. Then I store it onto my USB bar ...

I think I know this guy. A user called Chairman posted the same post on my other critique board so I think I've recruited another member. Hurray!

I really really liked that and I can't wait to read more!

I'd say Harry Potter was WAY better than Lord of The Rings!

Thank you all for the critique so far! This will make this story much better!

Prologue “Get down!” shouted the Captain. A large black and red dragon dived down from the sky and blew a large breath of fire onto the ship’s deck. Some of ...

The second one will be, once I actually finish the first chapter, and edit it. I can't wait to read it!