magiclukehutch

Chapter One Kevin Kuff, the Prime Minister of Great Britain, sat at his desk typing into his laptop. It was seven o’clock and Kevin was absolutely shattered. He picked up ...

Thanks a lot for your critique dark light. You don't become a man/woman until your 18 and that is a fact. And you don't usually find terrorists under 20, do ...

The boy's agency isn't called Little Terrorists. Thanks for the critique. I'm good at prologues., but not at books

This is my new version of the Little Terrorist Prologue. Prologue The night was silent and nothing stirred. The silence to was too quiet, and in a way it was ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! I'm Luke and I hope you enjoy yourself. I also hope to see you and your work around! Have fun! Luke

Loads of people say this and they are right. Where di9d you get this from?

Hi and welcome to YWS! I'm Luke and I hope you enjoy yourself! I also hope to see you and your work around. Luke 8)

Thank you for looking at my work! If you ever need me to look at anything, just PM me.

u posted, be patient. I've had pieces of work not recieve a crit until days after posting it. But as you asked so, ahem , nicely, here's a quick run-down ...

I didn't really understand this but the description was great. It was at a perfect length.

Is anyone going to crit my work? I'm not going to continue my book until I get critique so CRIT!!!

Prologue Lieutenant Liam Forester was running through a vast forest in an camouflaged army combat suit, wearing a bullet-proof helmet and armed with an SA 80 Individual Assault Rifle. Liam ...

I'm...not compeltely sure this is the place for questions like these—More like writing tips or something. I'd like it if it was science fiction, AS IN you knew a lot ...

I'm writing a fiction story about an SAS team that is sent to Iran to destroy military factories and Nuclear Research Departments. Then they discover that Iran have a nuclear ...

My wish would to be Bill Gates!!!