maegardens

This is my first time writing poetry on here, so please tell me if I should continue... The stinging wet crystals that roll down our cheeks The water that makes ...

I liked it, very evil. Most of the typos have already been covered by the other viewers, so I will be lazy and not go over them. :) The only ...

I think you did a very good job on this. I liked, if there were space commanders and stuff like that, the reality of the story. I could only find ...

This is very good. It's a great "short" story and builds up to a wonderful ending. I liked how Kaela is very stubborn in both parts but at the end ...

Sorry this is so freaking long! Hopefully you'll like it! ENJOY! Chapter 1: Dream girl I was in a perfectly square room with light blue walls. The carpet was yellow ...

OK, This is a very good start, but there's a few typos you should fix. When you say " This it a true story," I think you should say, " ...

I liked it! It is very beautiful! Although, I know this is the whole point of your story, to make someone die, but if he loved her, why'd he lie? ...

Wow! Very depressing! But ... very good. I liked it. It was a good short story. Only a few typos here and there, but otherwise it was very good. Nice ...

I think it was an interesting, creative story. Although, there are just a few things that you might need to edit. When Anya says, "What does this mean mom?" Mom ...

This is my first time writing this, so please tell me if you want to hear any more of the story I walked out of the boring middle school. I ...