maegardens

Hello, forgottenfallen, maegardens here to review. I'll start with the nitpicks. “So, how are we going to light this? I think you forgot to add an 'are' to his dialogue. ...

Hello, again, forgottenfallen I like your changes, and how you explained the angels' name, Lexus. I think you did a very good job with the first one, but an even ...

Hi! This is really good. I didn't find many nitpicks, and I think you worded it well. And, I'm sorely tempted to tell you to please make it into a ...

This is going to be a story from two person's views.The first view is TOM TOM The wind rustled through her hair as her high heels clanged against the metal ...

Hey, thanks for all the reviews guys! And, lemonly, it is kind of a humorous poem.

Thanks!!

Thank you! I like your version a bit better.

I'm so sorry. I haven't experienced a very big death in my life, (knock on wood) except for my dog who died of cancer, and my great great grandmother. This ...

Hi forgottenfallen, This seems to be kind of like the book by Neil Gaiman, Stardust. I don't know, the story just reminds me of that book. I didn't seem to ...

I recently joined here a few months ago, and it's really wonderful. I love how everyone on here isn't mean, but still gives good criticism. My writing has improved, doing ...

Hey, this is really good! I liked it, and I can't wait for the next part of the story to come out!

I noticed a few errors involving marks. That's about it, though. I liked the story a lot, and it's a good short story!

I like the story, although I'm pretty sure that it's about Nick Jonas and Selena Gomez, and I don't love that part too much. Everything else is awesome. Keep it ...

Hey, I really like this story! I plan to keep on reading it! But, I have a question. Is this the story of Selena Gomez and Nick Jonas from the ...

I awoke to the wonderful green pine tree that was decorated with numerous ornaments. I looked at the sparkling wrapping paper, and went straight to the stocking hanging above the ...