maegardens

Hi, WritingWords (love your name, by the way). This is maegardens. First I'll just get over with the nitpicks. “Ann, that bad habit of you jumping down the stairs should ...

This is Chapter two to 'Who is My Daughter?' Again, this view is from TOM TOM It's been six months after I've arrived back to my home planet. Sally had ...

Awwwwwweesome! This is really good. Even though usually people use this site for posting stories.. It's still really good. Lots of detail.

These are just all the typos that I found, and then I'll get to the REAL stuff. Exciting, these reviews, huh? And "love" isn ' t the most interesting thing ...

This was awesome. This is a true story? Aww... That kind of sucks, then. It was still a really good story, and I liked how you described the scenery and ...

I can't review. Well, not in 250 characters anyway. All I can say is: That was beautiful, awesome, sad, great. And probably a lot of other positive descriptions I can't ...

Lauren2010, I have actually been working on this more so I'd say, yes, this is probably going to be my first chapter to a larger story. Thanks for the review!

The meaningless lies That spread around The meaningful cries Tears fall to the ground The lies spread And gullible people believe them all A child's confidence slowly will shed It ...

silented1, I know. I was thinking of doing a lesbian poem, too. But it's hard to find rhymes that rhyme with lesbian, and usually the words aren't what I'm looking ...

I think it was a good poem. If you want to turn it into a song, then turn it into a song! I encourage you to do whatever you want ...

Two words: Freaking Hilarious!!!! Great job! I'm in between with Twilight and Harry Potter, but I think I'm going more for Harry Potter. OK, I'm definantly for team Harry Potter. ...

Awesome awesome AWESOME story! Please please write a sequel! PM if you do! OK, the only typo I spotted was in the last paragraph when you said, "Pulling away Juliet, ...

budding writer, Thank you for the review. I know, it was a bit of a mediocre chapter. And, the thing about the gum is that my science teacher a few ...

WARNING: THIS WILL TAKE SOME OF YOUR TIME! Hello. Thank you guys so much for the feedback and for waiting for the second chapter! I'm sorry it's taken so long! ...

Hi EdgarAllanPoet. This was a very good story, and you left it at a cliff hanger. Are you going to make a sequel? You have a few typos here and ...