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Very well written. Can definantly relate to it :)

Haha, yeah, I wrote most of this right after the concert so I didn't forget... Wasn't planning on posting it, but I did, any how. It wasn't THAT horrible... *vivid ...

Thank you guys for reviewing! The whole thing with her knowing his name before he told her it was a bit embarrassing... Haha, but thanks for pointing it out, probably ...

This was really good! I wrote a poem kind of like it, too, a while ago. It's good to let out emotions through poetry (even if they are/aren't yours). It ...

May have a few errors... Too tired to edit right now, but I'll be back. Please review! Enjoy. Chapter one: Adam I jumped back in my seat, waking up to ...

The Horrendous Rock Concert This is based off of a true event. The band's name has been changed for their privacy, and if there is a band name called 'The ...

Hey, this was really cool. I love roller coasters, as long as their hills aren't bigger than a building down town in the city. :) I that one typo has ...

It's a little shabby... Could need some work, but I don't know what to do, so review! PLEASE!? Enjoy! You stole what I'd said, To make it your own, You ...

OK, first I would like to cover the few typos I found. In this paragraph I thought you added a bit too many "met's" and when Paula asked "So how ...

Hey Wariofart (Great name!), I don't think it should be rated 18 and up, first of all. But then again, that may just be me :). Wow, this was really ...

I like what you have here. I think maybe you should go deeper into the story. Maybe add what was written. For example will the character not write any more ...

Thanks Attolia! I haven't put much thought into this story. The pop star is supposed to be a little bit washed up, like this is the near end of her ...

"NIKKI, COME HERE RIGHT NOW!" Victoria screeched. Rachael Lawrence had been the apprentice of the famous pop musician Victoria Spark for three years now, and Victoria still doesn't get her ...

Hello WritingWords! I'll go through the little nitpicks first. Oh, I don't know if you'd like to do this, but I was thinking of spacing out the paragraphs maybe a ...

Hey guys, thanks for the reviews... I know, it's a little shabby, mainly just to explain what happened....I do that a lot in my stories, sorry.