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Re: Mother
Flower~Child: I have been broken a lot, I think in this part that you have contradicted yourself. You say that nobody See's your tears, and yet when you are broken ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Mother
Mother You have never seen my tears, Not how I cry, anyway I cry not of love or loss, But for the world, For the peril, The evil, Everything My ...
Apr 10, 2010 -
Re: Music Room
I would like to say thank you to all of you for all of the positive feed back for this poem! I am quite happy with how it turned out, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Music Room
Music Room Noises echoed from the music room, Lullabies and hymns, Trickle out of instruments The brass and woodwind work together, In perfect harmony Bursts of music, flipping of sheets ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: The Beautiful Dead
KatTrain: I would to congratulate you by saying that you have given the most critiques of any poem I have posted, thanks! I agree with the detail. I should review ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: The Beautiful Dead
The beautiful dead are here, They always have been, They always will be Although dead, They carry their heads high A mask on their faces, Shield us, Hide their rotten ...
Apr 8, 2010 -
Re: The Sickness
Quetseli: I will agree the inside story is quite challenging, but it was suppose to be a form of computer virus. It's hinted at the end with the program bit. ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: The Sickness
I wouldn't wish this on anyone Not on my enemies, Nor the hated No one For no one deserves this nightmare It becomes a fear, You obsess over not getting ...
Apr 6, 2010 -
Re: Michael Jackson had a deep voice!
Wow that's crazy. I never would have thought that his voice was anything different. I always assumed it was the same high-pitched voice we all knew.
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Edit
Quetseli: Thank you so much! :D
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Edit
Forestqueen808: Thank you so much! I was really worried about being ripped apart with this being my first poem posted. I agree with what you said, and I will do ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Edit
A poem for school I wrote. :) I stand, nervous Palms sweaty, heart increasing casually, The red pen drawn, A weapon of destruction, To destroy my beauty, To destroy my ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: New & Hello!
Lauren: Thank you for your kind words! What do you like to write? Poetry? Fiction? I love to write both poetry and fiction, I try to change it up every ...
Apr 3, 2010 -
Re: New & Hello!
Hello! I just wanted to say hi, and that I am very excited to be joining this site, and I am happy to be meeting you. My name is Mackenzie, ...
Apr 3, 2010
