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Re: Blur the Lines - Part One - Chapters 10 & 11
I read a small part. I think you write dialogue quite well, but everything doesn't flow as well as it could.
Jun 27, 2011
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I read a small part. I think you write dialogue quite well, but everything doesn't flow as well as it could.
Jun 27, 2011
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