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Re: Something Out There
This is well written as far as the story line, there are a few grammar errors, but i see they have already been brought to your attention. although i am ...
Oct 30, 2007 -
Re: untitled a novel chapter one, i have revised this chapter
wow, this one grabbed me from the beginning, for your first time i will go easy. some of your paragraphs could be combined into the sentence. it seems to broke ...
Oct 19, 2007 -
Re: I need to say this, however i wrote this when i was fustrate
Dont ever give up on your dreams, something that brings you joy. Only you live your life, no one else does, Yes they should have their own . Do what ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: Redemption: Letting Go
I truly enjoyed reading your personal testimony. Your words actually put me in your situation. You did awesome with discription and getting the emotions to show. It is sad that ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: The Controversy of a Triune God in the Early Church
I liked your paper, it was the subject that got my attention. The three in one. Not many people truly understand what it means. Churches dont even touch on the ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: Question Game
the bucket has a hole in it? now what?
Jun 9, 2007
