lysolstinks

this was a good read. only i dont see it as a type of love affair, as i see it, it has to do with losing someone like a friend. ...

this was fun to read, off the beaten path. it put a smile on my face. so it must be good.

i think you have a good story line going, but you need to break up the paragraph, it is very hard to read. lysolstinks

i see you just posted this, any chance of letting me know when you post. so i dont have to constantly check. this one weirded me out. its not something ...

again, you surprised me with the dialogue. mental images i am not sure i want,. but yet i cant stop reading. very well done. lysolstinks

i have been following your story. it is intriguing, it goes places where i least expected. it also makes one think. is there something else out there we cant see. ...

i noticed only a few grammar errors, in the 4th paragraph you misspelled bridle, (bradle) also you rushed through the part when the girl gets bucked off, and then just ...

is it soft?

is it sweet?

for your first time, you did very well. there need to be more love stories, make the world a better place. will be lookiing for the next chapter.

very well done. short but sweet. says it all.

as was stated above, i see alot of spelling problems. just change the format , try using word on your computer. word will help you with the layout and the ...

this ch lacks the excitement of the last one, but it has me intrigued as to where you are taking it. i did not even look for errors, as i ...

This chapter rocks, it had me on the edge of my seat. well written, still grammar errors, but i am now headed to ch 4. i am actually liking this. ...

again with the same comments i have left re. ch one, i noticed you had more chapters posted, so i decided to see where the story takes me. this one ...