lysolstinks

This started out very good, I felt the the first and the last stanza let us know you were talking about writing. The middle two were just discriptions that took ...

This was ok. The last stanza didn't quite fit the flow. It stopped almost to harshly, and forced. But all in all it was good. carl

This is a very solid poem. no catchy rymes. I personally don't like the ryming as much. I do like the subject matter you chose to write on. It is ...

I have a hard time with your comment Gadi. Being mean to people to help them? Isn't that an oxymoron? People can critique, but do you really have to show ...

Your poem was very deep and thoughtful. It was very good. The only thing you need to do, is add puncuation, and capitlize. It made it difficult to read. Which ...

Although i normally do not read these types of poems, I did like this one. I found it very intriguing, lyslolstinks

I like how you introduced your new characters. This chapter very enteresting. lysolstinks

I have read this chapter when it was first posted. I had to come back and reread it, due to the controversy it seems to have created. Which is a ...

I have to agree with BigBadBear, other then grammar this is a very intriguing story. Just when I felt i was putting it together, You throw in another twist. I ...

All nine trees found ( you need to be more specific, why were they lost?) low on this high infinity ( this in no way ties in with the trees. ...

your casting put a smile on my face. can you imangine paris hilton? she would be the first to get chewed up. carl

the top one shows off the color of your eyes, and it shows an innocence not seen in the second one. , the color of your lips stand out also, ...

i wouldnt take enchantress muffins opinion seriously. you are not in anyway to skinny, the picture is actually ok to use for your icon, but since you didnt take it ...

this is beautiful, i like the detail around the mouth. you are very talented. carl

what to say. i really like the poem. half way thru i figured out who "Me" is. that changed the way i read it, so i had to go back ...