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i have to admit, it was not poetry at all. it seemed to be a mass of confusion. words and thoughts just didnt connect. i have read it a few ...

wow, i really like this. it took a second reading to figure it out. it has to totally suck for them, but it was their choice. And I must’ve screamed ...

DO NOT ENTER I warn you, beware You’re entering the room of a teenage girl Her private domain, her forbidden lair If you come in unannounced She will snap around ...

this was great written in prose, your feelings for your sister are genuine. I like how you chose to write this. I do agree if you were to go back ...

Blasphemy is the one sin that can not be forgiven. ex. Satan knowing and loving God and then denying Him. In Gods eye all the ten commandents ae the same ...

I'll put my two cents in, if nobody minds. I grew up in a catholic church, the same service every sunday. on saturdays going to ask the priest for forgiveness, ...

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cold... Warn... Chilly... Hot... Explains the seasons well enough, rigth? Or does it? I personally don't see any connec

Definitely unique. It made me laugh while reading. And who doesnt need a good laugh. Very well written, and excellent structure. Carl

I really liked the unique subject you chose to write about. I have to admit this is the first time I have ever read a poem on Hear worm. well ...

I really liked this, i wouldnt remove all the lines "God Knew we needed someone." It is a statement you are making with each paragraph. It flowed well and the ...

Audy, I liked this one. The emotion was very strong, sometimes writing while in the heat of feelings turns out a very good piece of work. Carl

Sorry I know i have already posted on this, but i just read chapter 12 and it was a while between postings, so i reread it to brief up on ...

I really like your style of writing. I have only read a few of your chapters, but i will go back and find the ones i missed. This story line ...

Another great chapter. You are slowly giving away the secret. I like that, it keeps the mystery going. I really like this book. Carl

I liked reading this, it helped knowing you were young when it was written. It was cute. carl