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Re: Character dialogue
Jake: *mildly, to the Raven* "What exactly ARE you anyway?" Marc: "Why does she think I'm named after pasta?"
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Rate The Idea Above You!
4/10 it has potential, but the frog thing...? I don't know lol. In a world where human beings are bred for beauty and intelligence, love is nonexistant. Marriage is arranged ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
Marc: "Go outside anyway. Weather doesn't bother me." Jake: "Same." Vanessa: "Yup, me too." Dax: "Weather's not a problem. I was sort of born outside." What do you do for ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Marc: "As a side note, I have tons of respect for you guys for putting up with her." Vanessa: "Thank you." Marc: "I was talking to Fal and Clover." Vanessa: ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Marc: "Well, you just get more charming every time you open your mouth, don't you?" Jake: "Sounds like something you would say." Marc: "Maybe that's why I don't like her."
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Vanessa: *delicately* "I can't exactly control the wind - things just get out of control when my emotions are high. When Jake gets angry things have a tendency to burst ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Vanessa: *raises hand* "Sorry." *the wind calms down* "I don't really enjoy being poked." Marc: "That's Nessie's very sweet and subtle way of saying, 'Stop &%#@!? touching me or I'll ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Marc: *indignantly* "I said I'd slip something into their drinks. I didn't say anything about poisoning them. What do you think I am, an assassin?" *realizes* *feels slightly awkward* "Oh...I ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Title Feedback
Either horror or melodramatic chick lit. I'd be interested. Defective
Apr 8, 2008 -
Re: Swearing In Stories
I try not to swear too often in my stories because I know that when I read books with a lot of language in it, it distracts me. My narrator ...
Apr 7, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Marc: "I'm telling you, we could totally fix this boredom. We could be theatrical about it and just blow up the building, or we could be subtle and slip something ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Description!
I stand on the edge of the unknown, ready to leap off the precipice and face the empty sky. There is only the slightest current in the air, a faint ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Lucy (no idea why...) A seventeen-year-old girl, tall, muscular, athletic, obnoxious, always sticks up for the underdog, major tomboy, a loner.
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Vanessa: "I think Marc was trying to be clever." Jake: "Ravens are scavengers. Raven just said that a whole month was devoted to her." Marc: "What was so confusing about ...
Apr 2, 2008 -
Re: Character dialogue
Marc: "Is April National Scavengers' Month or something?"
Apr 1, 2008
