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Wow. I've been working on mine for two years and it's not even close to finished. Congratualtions! Make sure you edit, and tighten everything up - it'll do wonders for ...

"Hmm...I don't know...maybe a cat? Or an otter?" ~Nessie "Bear." ~Jake "Some sort of cat, maybe...a lion or a leopard." ~Marc Do you often get sick?

thanks a lot! Those are good points, I'll work on them! i understand your confusion, and i'll explain as much as I can. 1. I intended to write about Gryphon ...

I liked the bluntness too. However, I think you should have...lead up to Tom's exile a little more. Rather than him just immediately being kicked out, you know? Maybe a ...

*shrug* oh well. who knows when someone else might need to know how to torture their character?

My friends and I have an ongoing joke that when we're twenty-one we're going to backpack around Europe...that's what I thought of instantly when you said that lol. So yes, ...

*nods sympathetically* I feel your pain. Although Marcella usually shouts snide remarks at idiotic boys. And thank you for commenting! I was beginning to think I was abandoned!

Don't write about a tragedy in your life or winning a football game or how good your grades are. Everybody writes about that. Write about an obscure hobby of yours ...

I think the beginning was a little odd too. I like one-word beginnings, but that didn't really work. I really liked the ending though, actually. I am rather confused (I ...

The clouds hovered cold and gray above the aerie like masses of steel. I shivered as the damp breeze fluffed up the feathers tracing down from my neck to my ...

Description description description! That's my advice to almost every young writer. Although, you did a pretty good job with that. So I'll agree with rimewind and say - give us ...

something terribly comedic...maybe two people who are trying to survive in the Alaskan wilderness and don't know that they're being filmed. I'd read it. :D Firebrand

logosgal. if she can tell me what it means, maybe i'll change my mind, but yeah. Most Rabid "Pat Buchanan" Supporter

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE To Kill a Mockingbird. I finished reading it about two weeks before it was due for my literature class. It is amazing. The dialogue ...