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Oh yeah, I loved reading "Midnight Sun" on her website. Edward's not as... I don't know, OBSESSED as Bella it seems. His mind is more interesting; it deals with other ...

Hey! I really enjoyed this! You put kind of a new twist on the old werewolf idea. I put my corrections in bold. :D ~Sunny (First attempt at Fantasy. Gulps!) ...

go for it! And don't forget - if at first you don't succeed, try, try again! I didn't get my job at the paper until the THIRD time I went ...

Yeah, Razorblade kind of just said everything I was planning to say. :D I like the general idea, though. I'm looking forward to reading the rewrite.

Don't you guys have anything normal to talk about?

You and I may have to chat sometime about language. :D I'm trying to flesh out a mythical language, but it only comes into play sometimes, sort of like yours, ...

*pouts* Stephenie better give Jacob a really, really, REALLY good girlfriend in Breaking Dawn, or else I will never be happy.

Man, I don't think I'll be able to keep up the 2 reviews per post deal...I think I'll shoot for 1.5 instead. That I can probably do around school, work, ...

If you live in a small town, newspapers are always looking for relevant pieces about high school/middle school sports, choirc concerts, honor students, and things like that. I work for ...

Well, I'm still figuring out how to build romantic tension myself, so I can't give you a detailed guide lol.

Eh, I don't hate Edward. He just annoys me. And i still like werewolves better than vampires. *shrug* Hey, did you just have a birthday? Or am I just blind ...

Cool! You should post them, I love looking at stuff like that. :D

Sweeeeeet. I want a cool name like Sonnet... Anyway, I still like your story Timara! (Just thought we were getting a little off topic. :D)

Hey your name really Sonnet?

*is interested* Who's a romantic interest? Yazra and...? Sorry, that's not very helpful. Uh, start with dialogue. Little bits of body language like running fingers through hair, clearing throat, stari