lyrical_sunshine

Marc: "Flying." Vanessa: "Oh yeah, definitely flying." Jake: "I hate you both." What are you craving right now?

I get a lot of ideas from dreams. Dreams are awesome. Almost all my bad guys come from nightmares...which isn't so awesome, but at least I can create realistic antagonists. ...

ouch...well, you asked me not to judge, so i won't. but did you mean to spell "saliva" instead of "silvia"?

Oooh, I'm jealous! What contest do I have to enter to get one of those lol?

lol i totally love how only the people over 15 understood this. (except Moe...sorry...) anyway, it made me giggle.

oooh. spell check. SPELL CHECK, please. sorry, i realize you're younger than most on here and so you obviously haven't graduated to the grade where teachers fail you for bad ...

Marc: "Uh...yesterday." Jake: *thinks* "Yeah, yesterday sounds right." Vanessa: "Um...maybe...no, wait...sorry, I can't remember." What's your least favorite thing to study in school/college/whatever

Actually, dialogue is a great way to go...if it is used properly. Your dialogue should flesh out your characters and give voice to their conflicts. Otherwise it is pointless. If ...

hey buddy. since i already edited your story in class today I won't do it again, lol, just want to say again how much i love your description! and look! ...

Yeah! Actually I like most of the cast - except for Esme. I like Alice and Emmett the best. But still, I think the girl at honor choir was a ...

Um...I feel like the font or something on this messed up, and it's really hard to read. Also there are weird, weird paragraph breaks. Could you please fix them before ...

Guess what!! They totally casted the Twilight movie wrong, cuz I just met the REAL Alice Cullen this weekend, lol. Okay, not really. But I went to an honor choir ...

No, actually...I thought it was a little random. It made me like him more, though. It explains why he's kind of quiet and serious all the time. I don't know. ...

12/17/07 021 – Friends They thought that we were stupid, and we played along. They thought that I was dumbly following the Mass, not really understanding (need a comma here) ...

10/10 pretty, pretty.