lyrical_sunshine

Just make your characters real. People get mad at each other, they fight, they cry, they scream, they get scared, they're uncomfortable, they change their minds - don't make their ...

*gasp*! You want to make me an avatar? Because I have a techno-demon that possesses me everytime I use a computer. Things break when I try to use them. Needless ...

LOL!!!! Northern Virginians are in denial that they're Southerners. I should know; I was born there. And Unwritten is an awesome, awesome song. And I laugh all the time. And ...

Marc: "Well, you just get more charming every time you open your mouth, don't you?" Jake: "Sounds like something you would say." Marc: "Maybe that's why I don't like her."

this is really good! can't wait to read the rest!

lol, deserts, not desserts. i love my chocolate, but i don't like cactus.

AHHH! WINDSURFING!! *is jealous* I've always wanted to try that. :D

More deeply personal stuff about me! Yay! lol. 1. I love the ocean. I can float for hours in those waves and be totally content. When I get the opportunity ...

Vanessa: *delicately* "I can't exactly control the wind - things just get out of control when my emotions are high. When Jake gets angry things have a tendency to burst ...

Vanessa: *raises hand* "Sorry." *the wind calms down* "I don't really enjoy being poked." Marc: "That's Nessie's very sweet and subtle way of saying, 'Stop &%#@!? touching me or I'll ...

Changed my mind. I like the clock lol. Took me a while, but I decided. :D

Marc: *indignantly* "I said I'd slip something into their drinks. I didn't say anything about poisoning them. What do you think I am, an assassin?" *realizes* *feels slightly awkward* "Oh...I ...

i really liked only problem is that the "article" didn't really sound like an article. I work at a newspaper, and I don't think any editor would allow a writer ...

this is excellent, and i am surprised you're so young. watch out for extra-long sentences, though; they tend to be run-ons. and i think you had a couple mistakes... like ...

sweet! i'll do that. tell him congratulations for me!