lyrical_sunshine

Marc: "I think it's past somebody's bedtime." Jake: "What's synthesia? Is it that thing where people see words in color and pictures and stuff?" Vanessa: "What?" Marc: "What?" Jake: "Like ...

*falls over* Oh my goodness, this is beautiful. I love it! It almost made me cry. I know how that feels to walk into a soup kitchen and feel almost ...

Very good! I'm excited to read more. The bits of language were great - not too extensive, but just enough to give us a picture of this world you created. ...

Jake, Vanessa, Dax, and Serenity just kind of popped into my head - I don't know why. Marc's name was very strategically chosen - go look up "Marcella" on babynames. ...

I have a "pure evil" character. Her name is Rachael - meaning "innocent lamb." :D You could try something like that.

Jake: "'S alright. I don't need to shed blood to hurt anyone." Vanessa: "Shut up, Jake. And actually, Blake, we do need that many names. Because if we only use ...

"he swore loudly" or "he swore violently" is a good substitute, and it doesn't get old. i have the same problem. sometimes i need to spell out my swearwords, but ...

Marc: "Pork rinds." Vanessa: "Sushi." Jake: "Don't care." If you had to choose between the ability to fly or the ability to read minds, what would you choose?

Jake: "I like Kit. She makes sense." Vanessa: "No blood, please." Jake: "Not unless someone deserves it." Vanessa: "Jake? NO BLOOD." Marc: *sighs* "We're trying to tame him, really." Vanessa: ...

More more more! :D

I think certain characters and places are neat (the werecat is awesome) but Eragon just irritates me. The whiny brat is the hero. What is the world coming to?

Marc: "Scavenger works well, in my opinion." Dax: "But nobody cares, remember?" Marc: "Why are you here?!" Dax: "Slavery isn't all that thrilling, contrary to popular belief. I wanted to ...

I chose English, but I love P.E. too. :D

8/10 very true.

Marc: "Um...wear a pink frilly dress and dance around singing the 'Barbie girl' song." Jake: *bursts out laughing* Vanessa: "Ride the Tower of Doom at Elitches." Jake: *stops laughing* "Seriously?!" ...