lyrical_sunshine

Oooh, SHUT DOWN!!! Sorry, I had to. This is just fun, Gryph. Keep it up!

Hey, thank you guys for your input! I've edited it, so if you'd like to take another look, feel free. :)

Church: Nothing. Absolutely nothing of substance. Don't buy the fourth one.

I've seen this in bookstores and wanted to read it. I read Nancy Farmer's "The Sea of Trolls" and I really enjoyed her style.

* “You, oh king, are the king of kings…” The statue erupted from the earth this time without a trace of iron or bronze, its gilt surface scattering rainbows across ...

I don't know!! *head/desk* Can we somehow make this simpler? lol.

10/10 I'm not even sure it makes sense, but I still like it, lol.

9/10 it's very...you. :D

Hey there! I'm sensing a friendship/romance/partnership thing developing with Clover and Iolo, and I like it. But for some reason I keep thinking that Iolo is a blind bard. I've ...

Cychwyn ar daith We left Londlow early the next day. It was warm, with a tiny wind that whipped up strands of the carthorse’s mane and blew dust in our ...

This is a very good point - one that I definitely need to work on, lol.

Reminds me of Stardust, actually. I like it. :D Defective

*peers cautiously around the forum* Am I the only one who really enjoyed this? I loved it, and it made sense to me. Does this mean I'm insane, like Imp? ...

This reminds me of something that should be in "Chicken Soup for the Kid's Soul" lol. It was well written and sweet. I can't give you a lot of advice ...

Hmm...I've only skimmed both the original and the rewrite, but I think I like your first one better. Then again, I'd probably have to take time to read both of ...