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Ooh, mysterious. :D I've never actually read any Dean Koontz books. I guess I'm just not a huge fan of mysteries. Not sure way. Maybe I'll check it out.

I have no idea what you guys are talking about with the hints about the third book, lol. Apparently I'm out of the Paolini loop. :D

Have you ever had those random thoughts like, "I wonder what it would be like to fly inside a cloud?" or "It would be so cool to discover life on ...

It's alright, nobody will delete it, a mod will probably just move it. I only just skimmed this, but I really like the journalling style. I'll give a more thorough ...

Happily, the tyrannical era of writer's block has ended, and yet again, it was overthrown by excercise, journalling and relaxation. No beating the computer this time. From here (here being ...

Awww..c'mon..don't you think you guys are being a little hard on Paolini? Everyone KNOWS he's not even near being as awesome a writer as Tolkien, or CS Lewis. But cut ...

Haha, great - I'll be facing a four hour plane ride here in two weeks. :D I will most definitely check it out then. It's on hold for me at ...

Yay for the redemption of Stephenie Meyer. :D Angels will celebrate the day when Stella and I forgave her, lol.

Again, I'm only going to critique storyline things. Chapter 3...please tell me if it's awful or not!!! ***** Looking out a door and seeing something that doesn’t exist is one ...

Chapter 2 Um, I think everyone else got the detailed critique. I just have one comment about the storyline. Why would Alicia immediately think that the boy was a sprite? ...

I like the fishy, personally. 9/10

Fantasy: ~The Circle Trilogy (Black, Red, White), Showdown, Saint by Ted Dekker ~Shadowmancer by G. P. Taylor ~The Chronicles of Narnia by C. S. Lewis ~A Wrinkle in Time, A ...

It really is nice to see emotion on paper, instead of just flowery words that are pointless. Nice job. Although, I think you need to capitalize, "lord". *hugs Love2act* And ...

It's like anti-Twilight! Go you! :D

*gasp* You don't like fire??? Don't read my novel. But you get extra points because werewolves are a million times better than vamps.