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The boy stared at it. It stared back. The silence lingered, stretched taut. Neither of them said anything; the boy was too terrified to think and with good reason. The ...

Chapter Three “Elementals are, as you know, the source and the beginning of magic in our world.” Karenna sat with her head in her hands, listening in bored dismay to ...

I think perhaps the most dangerous thing that could come out of the Inheritance Trilogy is the idea that (as the boy put it himself "all fantasy is derivative." It ...

hmm... 5/10

hehe. 7/10

I only saw one grammatical error worth mentioning: Her heart pounded and muscles tightened, shudders wracked her body as she tried to breath, she was trapped! This is a run-on ...

I'm going to be really nit-picky, just because this is so good. :D Prologue The children were not watching the storyteller. Instead their eyes [s]were [/s]focused on the frail boy ...

Stephenie Meyer - but ONLY when her prose consists of describing in excruciating detail the angelic, supermodel good looks of teenage vampires. When she's writing about said teenage vampires murdering

Reject club!! *parties*

*sigh* I'll get it right someday...

hehehe.

*cue spooky music* 9/10 :D

It's almost 10:30 here, but I'm not tired. I don't think I'll be tired for the next month. After 80 pages of confusion, pain, frustration, and ridiculous plot twists that ...

Hey, there's actually a thread for this in either the Lounge or the Randomness section...I should know, I started it. :D

8/10 very weird...i really have no idea what you're talking about, honestly.