lyrical_sunshine

Washingtong state and Oregon.

Hello! My name is Sunny and I will be your reviewer for today! *waves* The bolded words and phrases are my comments or corrections, and words or phrases with slashes ...

My prettyful writing notebook: *huggles* What would I do without it?

It had been three hundred dollars. Try, "It cost three hundred dollars." “Anyway. Why am I here?” “The government is less likely to bug a government building.” She nodded. “Word.” ...

I'm thinking about writing a story dealing with a young spy who is sent to infiltrate a terrorist organization using children for war...very unique children. The problem is, I have ...

I just sort of threw this together during a school day. I just want to see what others think of it. Carter Adams, an unwanted teen of 19 years, walked ...

Hmm...I agree with Kylan. This is well-written and you have excellent grammar, but it seemed to drag on too long. Sure, have him wrestle with himself, but think about it ...

I thought the movie was okay, but then again I've never read the books, so I had nothing to base it off of. Although the first part of the movie ...

Marc: *finishes coffee* "Mmm...Oh, we don't make fire. We're made of fire." Vanessa: "Sort of. Touched fire runs in our veins. It's literally in our blood. So using fire - ...

Hey! I have been working on this for ages, then suddenly and violently fell out with it! I think i've seen it too many times, I now truly hate it. ...

Haha, that's a great point. You DON'T make reservations to go to the Olive Garden, do you? Honestly, I just couldn't think of a really nice restaurant. Any suggestions? And ...

This is a totally random piece I started a few months back and just recently finished. ***** “Alright, Jen, so tell me about him.” Soul mate. Yeah, I’ve heard that ...

I suck at critiquing music, but I thought this was beautiful. Well done. I especially loved the bridge. :D Can't wait to hear it.

Probably no one ever will replace Edward...but someone should seriously try.

No!! Don't delete it - it just needs to be moved. I skimmed through it the other day, and it seems very good. One thing I did notice though - ...