lyrical_sunshine

Known for being a Warriors fan.

Known for being OLD. (Kidding. Just kidding.) Known for being a great writer and lover of kittens.

*dies laughing* Snoink is my hero! *high fives Snoink* I love it. I was getting a little tired of hot, sweaty, passionate sex scenes. Thank you! That made my day. ...

I am purple! *huggles username* *huggles admins* Let's see, advice...well, my characters were really awkward to start out. It wasn't exactly a declaration of love or a moment of passion;it ...

Known for thinking she's a cat.

(Cute, twit.) I somehow made it through a romantic scene without vomiting up cheese, without rushing, and without inserting my characters into soap operas. They remained real and angst-ridden instead ...

Known for being relatively new on YWS and aspiring to be a Magi. :D

The deck of the Smokescreen groaned and sighed with age and exhaustion. The wood was salt-puckered and beaten from the wind, creaking underfoot as the four crossed. The wind punched ...

Hey, all: Thank you so much for your compliments! This is the first romantic short story I've ever written, so I wasn't sure how good it was. I appreciate the ...

Chapter Four Headmaster Tavrinal bent over a few sheets of parchment, his pen scratching as he wrote. The candle beside him dripped wax onto the oak desktop as the flame ...

Marc: "Jake. Nessie's a very, very close second." Jake: "Marc. Ditto about Nessie." Marc: "We've kind of been through this." Rain, snow or hail?

hehe. 9/10

I'm not sure this is poetry...but that's ok. :D I agree with Sketch. I think you should describe the fireworks a little. Not in great, poetic detail, because that's not ...

Hmm, I think Vernon and Insomnia got most of the grammar issues. That being said, this was a very original piece and not what I expected at all. Nice job. ...

Hey everybody! This has been edited, so if you want to take another look, hopefully it flows better this time.