lyrical_sunshine

"Let's not start a civil war here, please." ~Nessie "I wish I could swear in Elvish." ~Marc

10/10. haha.

You can only break the rules if you truly understand them in the first place. gah! my writing teacher says that all the time... grr... "I feel the best way ...

^ what she said. it could be wonderful - just add some color. do some family history research. look at pictures of new york to take a good look at ...

excellent. really, really excellent. Dang, i'm impressed. She sat on the bench day after day, dressed eternally in a gray scarf, a threadbare wool coat, an ancient felt hat, and ...

Marci: "UGH! Will everyone STOP BEING RETARDED?" Jake: "You do it all the time." Marc: *stickS tongue out* "You're a jerk." Jake: "You're dating me." Marci: *gets defensive* "Not until ...

be sad. but you know, life goes on. i have bookworm friends who like to read my stuff (however, most of them think i'm crazy when i talk to myself ...

hey! we have a set of twins in my school and we call them Thing One and Thing Two...they even have like miner helmets with stickers that say Thing One ...

i LOVED the movie. of course, i've never read the book, so maybe that's why.

*growls* i claimed him LONG before you did!! I've been parading in front of him for a year now, waiting for him to imprint on me. HA!!!

wow, this is really beautiful. you're only thirteen? i'm impressed. as far as critiquing goes, i HATE critiquing poetry too much, because if you critique too much you take away ...

Wouldn't you run away if you were being beaten? Why was the hamster on the pogostick?

GAAAH!! will someone else please review this? i have to send it in soon you know!!! THIS COULD AFFECT MY ENTIRE FUTURE!!! ok, sorry. i'm just slightly stressed lol.

hi! i'm lyrical_sunshine, you can call me Sunny (isn't that the coolest nickname? ha!) you'll like it here i'm sure, there are some very good critics. ooh, a monologue? those ...

well, i think everyone else caught the mistakes i saw. your voice is beautiful, i feel like the nomads are real people and the language is one i could learn ...