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i have no idea what to think about that. it's so random i might pick it up. FireSong

i really, really, really liked this. i like the way it showed who you are without coming out and saying it. really good.

Robert Jordan's (RIP) stuff. *gasp* I love Robert Jordan! sure, he's a little cliche, but the stories are just so well-developed that you don't care. plus, every story has some ...

oooh, another journalism buff! well, actually i'm not a buff, but i am a journalist, and i write sports articles too. i work for our local paper as a student ...

i really can't say anything that hasn't already been said. there were a lot of run-ons, which made it tiring to read, but the imagery was beautiful, very vivid. i'm ...

oooh, good, you are puzzled...well, just a warning, you will be puzzled until the very last chapter lol. thank you very much for your kind review. it's encouraging.

Show, don't tell! Don't jump right in and tell us that the crystal shard can still hold magic, or that it's unusual for a White Mage to befriend a shadow ...

okay everyone, i'm really sorry about this, but i'm not posting anymore on this story. i'm not sure if posting my novel on this website would keep me from getting ...

I want a hot fudge sundae. I also want to finish my prologue before midnight. grrr.

lol. 9/10. i don't completely get it but it makes me laugh.

ooh, pretty... 8/10.

If you absolutely, positively cannot write, don't. Not at that moment. Of course, there is a fine line between writer's block and laziness. So stop writing for a bit, and ...

i only skimmed this because i'm currently writing something else, lol, but it sounds good. i only caught one thing that was a little awkward. "Probably all of his comic-books ...

cool. :D i like it. i would totally pick it up. sounds like it would make me laugh. have you ever read the Enchanted Forest Chronicles? Talking to Dragons, Searching ...

Marc's favorite quote: "That which doesn't kill me will only make me stronger." Jake's favorite quote: "We confide in our strength, without boasting of it; we respect that of others, ...