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Re: The Blue King - Prologue
hmm...i really like this. it is a little too much information, but you know, it could work. build it up a little slower though; describe everything while you're introducing your ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Firebrand: Prologue (formerly"The Burning")
thank you guys so much! Aisho - can you tell me exactly which part you were talking about? I couldn't seem to find it. greenjay - i know, i'm not ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
hmm...something about fishing. Firebrand
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Cliche Fantasy
he wrote "The Wheel of Time" series. I've only read the first one, "The Eye of the World." It was very good, although its hard to get into at first ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Hello Everybody, I'm new at this
hey! nice poem, although it sounds more like a song than a poem to me. and i'm Irish as well. :D well, at least my grandparents were yeah...I'm technically American ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: hello all
*gasp* look! we are from the same country! well, almost. hello, I'm lyrical_sunshine, a.k.a. Sunny. nice to meet you. :D
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Firebrand: Prologue (formerly"The Burning")
thank you guys so much! you're very encouraging. but if there is anything you see that needs improvement, go ahead and tell me.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Treacle
haha, i like this! but what is treacle? it just makes me think of Alice in Wonderland....
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Thought of the moment
I'm thinking...I wish I could figure out how to word this sentence for my article.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Your theme song
Post the song, artist, and lyrics here! Mine: "Unwritten" by Natasha Bedingfield I am unwritten, can't read my mind, I'm undefined I'm just beginning, the pen's in my hand ending ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Which authors/books do you hate?
Unlike most, I really like Dickens. :D One of the many authors that I really hate thus far is Dee Henderson, namely for her work The Protector. Her entire focus ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: THE Biography
what is a sea monkey? i've never been able to figure that out... haha, i like you, you seem fun and random. and i never thought of defining my weight ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Talking about myself
yay! you do get a cookie! btw, i've been reading some of your writing instructor things, and they're really good, very helpful. :D if you want to read some of ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Talking about myself
:D thanks i'm currently working on the next chapter of "The Burning", so if you liked the prologue keep an eye out. Thanks for reviewing it.
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
I'm not sure what I think of the two things together. I immidiatly think of some fantasy novel which has the elements as powers, the main character with fire...I wouldn't ...
Sep 23, 2007
