lyrical_sunshine

It was a dreary day at Hallows Wharf. The feeble March sun struggled to fight through the gray haze that engulfed the shore. Even the bright reds and yellows of ...

1. I have a million nicknames, among them Bunny, Special K, Smiles, Schizo, and Sexy Giraffe (given to me by a bisexual friend lol). 2. I have had a grand ...

VIDEO GAMES ROT YOUR BRAIN!! RUN AWAY BEFORE YOUR NEURONS DININTEGRATE!!! nice to meet you winters. *runs away*

5/10...i don't really get it. what's the cross have to do with anything?

very pretty, but is this actually a poem? you might want to post it in "Other Fiction" or something. in the second paragraph i don't think i liked the word ...

i'm so confused! but since we're on the subject, what does SPEW stand for anyway? i think of the elf-freedom society thing in HP every time i see it.

hi! out of curiosity, what's with the username? i'm Sunny by the way, or lyrical_sunshine, or Bunny, or Special K, or schizo...yeah, i have a lot of nicknames. anyway. nice ...

third stanza would be great. in my opinion you should have a slightly more hopeful tone if you added a third stanza. why do we mourn? we mourn because we ...

yeah i actually noticed that i should take out "all" right after i posted it. i didn't actually write this poem for it to be amazing literature or anything, it ...

wow, they have Scooby Doo in Raven's world? I didn't know that... yay for wolves.

Forgive me for my fearfulness, my comfort zones, my pride Forgive me for the things that I keep locked away inside Forgive me for the words that never seem to ...

Marc: "A dancing dog. And I thought our story was weird." Jake: "You are a lot weirder than a dancing dog." Marc: *shrug* Vanessa/Nessie: "Our author's been hard at work ...

oooh, very good, very good. keep it up!

agreed...with everyone above. original idea, but more showing, less telling.

I want to be an author. I've wanted to since I was about seven lol. But I also want to be a creative writing teacher. So to answer your question, ...